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for Everybody Here Wants You

by microwavebubbles

schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was fun. I like that he wanted so badly to charge once again. It bodes well for when they finally come together. tee hee hee Thanks! HG4eva
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I like the way both characters are vying for dominance and neither wants to back down. The awkwardness and desire to ignore the proverbial hypogriff in the room is perfect. I can't wait for another chapter.

Great job with the sexual tension by the way


Lady Serin
person daycrump79
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story do you know how i can put
it on some kind of fav i always have to go looking
for it. i love your writing style so please update
very soon.
person daycrump79
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i also hope that when they do get down to
the sex that it is very hot talking going
on thats always fun to read,i mean i love
the whole making love thing also but everyone
knows that sex starts off that way but it
ends being much more when you cant hide your
passion. once again love the story and update soon.
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person LovableLoser
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know, that so far I'm enjoying your story, even though I'm only 3 chapters in. And, I vote for Harry.
person treer
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY...another chapter! Loving the game stance. Though, can't imagine him in different clothes, hee hee!
Can't wait for the next one!
person DarQuing
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Blah, enough with the seduction. :P We all know they want to have wild, passionate monkey-sex. Get there and get 'er done. :D

Update soon, please! ^_^
person emer
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, its brilliant
person treer
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee! Update soon!