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for On Fire

by Harcopotfoy

person luna4917
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy Hell!! While I can't say I like the CBT, the rest is quite....engaging. I've already forwared the link to a couple of people to read. Keep going!!
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping he'd get caught this time, so YES PLEASE, do another where he get's caught. (pretty please?)Very good, loved it.
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it and definitely want more! So what do you say you break out a box of carrots and wait for that bunny to hop along again? I think it would really be worth it. :)
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liked it? I freaking LOVED it! He should TOTALLY get caught! By Severus, and all the lovely smexiness THAT could lead up to! I would be soooo happy if you wrote more to this, it was great!
person ech1964
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please please please ... someone needs to have spied on this. Who and how will they react? OMG you need another chapter.
person sanda
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story
person Juana13
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that is masturbation!!!! hahahaha
so hot. and he was by himself at that. Can't imagine what it would be like if he had sex with someone.