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for On Fire

by Harcopotfoy

person Leania07
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow I haven't reviewed this yet..odd. Granted that level of pain and such... >,< but oddly enough..hot. I've always enjoyed the stories where Sevy can let loose ;) I enjoy the 'softer side of Snape' but I do love the Dom side just as much. You did well on this story!

Leania
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love that you used snape as the one to find him. We knew Sev was dark, but he always had to try and live up to Dumbles expectations. I think part of his attitude was dealing with the repression and denial of his needs. Now that he's not feeling guilty for getting pleasure out of hurting someone, and harry is acting a little more normal; will he start acting slightly less sadistic in class causing the other teachers to begin worrying about him? And investigating him, who will find both of them? Flitwick might be able to design some nice charms for their use :D
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was hot, and i liked how you worked snape in there, don't think any of the others would have known quite what to do with harry if they had found him like that, probably figured some death eater had managed to sneak in and torture him lmao. keep up the good work :)
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more please!!!
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*brain is melted* *points* that's all the review you get without a brain...guh of the highest, yummiest order...
person poluxtr
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very hot =D how about some kinky DracoxHarry?? *winkwink*
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update soon i love this story
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I can't wait for him to get caught and who does the catching and causes more of that delicious pain! Update soon please!
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gods I loved this. Unlike a lot of the others I personally vote for Harry -not- getting caught too soon because there is something so deliciously wicked about him doing this to himself with no one the wiser. I don't know if you do suggestions but since you just spent an entire chapter having Harry beat the hell out of his cock and balls I vote for an enema chapter. Whatever you do wind up doing, I hope you'll keeping tossing chapters on when you get the chance!
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I.Need.MORE!!! ...please?