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by Bunzilla

schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How did Draco manage to get Hermione to be his slavey girl??
Great story so far, loved this chapter!!
Can't wait for more!!
xoxo
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
His behaviour is very canon but what does he feel? I'm very interested to see where you're taking this. Dark Draco is something else. There is clearly no escape and they can't play these games forever so what will he do?
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good writing and good start. interesting beginning. I hope you give us Draco's POV as well. so she's a slave and that's all?
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting:) Please keep up!
person Mandy88
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, I hope we know more about how Hermione got into this situation and what her first times being there were like. Please continue!
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice start, can't wait to see where you take this!
xoxo
person kazfeist
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An auspicious beginning....hopefully things will improve for our heroine?
person Johanna
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I quite like the concept and your language beautiful. I'll be expecting a new chapter.