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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love love love LOVE your story ^_^ i look forward to it all the time...i just wish you could update more often but i'll take wat i can get ^_^ once again looooove your story!! cant wait for the next update!!
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Kitty luna
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Kitty luna
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story, and it surprises, because I don't usually read school-era stories. But you've really created an interesting tale that's just pulling me in. Good stuff.
Minor point, but you might want to use a beta, or just someone to help with spelling errors and the like, because there are a lot of them. Like saying that Ron is "conceded" when you meant "conceited," misusing your/you're or its/it's, and the tenses are sometimes confused. Just enough mistakes to be distracting, but at least they don't detract from the story itself.
Hoping you update again soon.
Minor point, but you might want to use a beta, or just someone to help with spelling errors and the like, because there are a lot of them. Like saying that Ron is "conceded" when you meant "conceited," misusing your/you're or its/it's, and the tenses are sometimes confused. Just enough mistakes to be distracting, but at least they don't detract from the story itself.
Hoping you update again soon.
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The combination of confusion, sadness, anger and unexpected is simply well balance......... Keep them coming.
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm so happy you updated. :D This is one story that hasn't let me down yet. I wonder if you meant anything with the Malfoy smirk remark towards the end of chapter 8. Crazy if he's decieving her. :P Love it and hope you are able to update soon. :D
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love this story. Best I have read in ages!.....more soon please :)
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing tale. Looking forward to reading more.
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June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is great! :D I love the dynamics of the entire thing. I guess I don't really like Becka - her name isn't very traditional or quirky... but I love the concept of her! I hope you continue this for a very long time! :) It totally has 5 smiley faces from me!!
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June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now I really want to know why he never casts spells, I don't think I've ever been so curious about a plot point in my life, I'm hoping that they'll admit that the love each other as soon as possible, but at the same time I don't want to wish the story away. I am really enjoying this story, I'm really glad you're continuing. DIMDA
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting! I like this entire alternate universe, and Harry/Hermione/Draco being just like James/Lily/Snape. I wonder how Draco will react to her revelation.