rate_review Reviews

you've done a wonderful job of making me anxious for them to get together

I'm enjoying your story.

Suggestion: Please space more between your paragraphs and conversations. This would make your story much easier to read and more enjoyable for your readers.

Ooooh, that was good! I can't wait for the dance! I hope you update soon! :-)

-A Mere Reader

Oh how lovely to have you back! And what a chapter! I liked every single "scene" so I don't know what feedback I can give that will be helpful. I think the choice of costumes is great. Is Luna a fairy? And I finally feel "okay" with this new world. Like Hermione, I had trouble letting go of the "old world"..but you summed it up so perfectly that it is as though you are in my head. And I, as with everyone else, am so curious as to what Draco is thinking during all of this. CANNOT wait to see where this goes! Please come back with more, when you can.
Thanks!
SW

This is one of the best stories I have ever read! Keep up the good work and post soon please!!

Great story! Just started reading and read through all the chapters at one 'cause I loved it. Draco is great in this, I really love him. Can't wait for Hermione to give in. Also can't wait to hear what his secret is.

Okay, so I have just read the first two chapters of this fic and all I LOVE IT!

Hmm, I wonder what Draco's secret could be. I feel bad for Hermione about the whole 'not being friends with Harry and Ron' thing, but I think she's slightly selfish to want her old life back when hundreds of lives were saved by a single wish. Although I have a feeling that her parents are no longer with this world. I like this new Neville, he's like a version of the one who chopped off Nagini's head.

I loved the way Mione and Draco became freinds that scene was all kinds of sweet. I don't know if my little Dramione heart can take anymore of such loveliness.

There are only a few chappies left. :( I wish hadn't clicked on this link because a. you don't update regularly and b. your chapters aren't long. *sniff*

Okay, so I was wrong about Hermione's parents being dead. I guess the dream was about her being alone in the woods, so she must think it's an omen. idk. I really love this version of the hp world. It's nice to know that the Weasley's are rich, even if Ron is an ass.

I can't wait to learn why Draco can't defend himself, which is a very interesting twist. I hope it doesn't last forever. :/