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You said you'd post warnings as appropriate. And then we get this freakin' RAPE chapter where it isn't even the pairing we're here to read about it with NO FREAKIN' WARNING.

Took me totally out of the story and I honestly don't know if I want to come back. Not because I haven't read well done fics in which Hermione has been violated by another character within a Dramione story, but because as at least one other reviewer has said, this came out of nowhere. Harry was a prat, and possessive, but this was over the top. I was interested in Draco's secret and Hermione's growing relationship with him. Unexpected plot twists are usually wonderful things, but they have to be well set up. There's a difference between being unexpected and coming out of left field.

Sigh, you really jumped the shark with that last chapter. I mean, wow, talk about contrived. I REALLY try to give constructive criticism but it's hard after reading plot driven work. That last chapter was a mess, a real mess, and it's sad that it ruined this entire story for me. It KILLED the story. I don't care if Harry is supposedly under the imperious curse or some other, potion or spell, it is beyond my understanding as a writer, why you chose to put that scene there? There was no build up to the event, no tension, and if Harry isn't under a potion or spell it's ridic that one minute Harry seems to be growing and then out of nowhere he's violating Hermione. Try telling character driven stories, they will give you the pay off you want in the end without resulting to cheap fandom, shock value plot devices.

Constructive: If you were hell bent on Harry raping Hermione you should have spent more time developing the character so that the reader could have had an emotional connection to the character. I really wanted to feel bad for Hermione, but I struggling to understand what I was reading.

Tell me, tell me, tell me PLEASE that this story has Happy Ending Insurance?! Because after the disgusting, revolting, horrible, awful, terrible events from that last chapter, I'm not sure I can hold out. And Harry's wand had better be tested to show the Auror's what happened!!! And while it IS kinda in Hermione's best interest that she not remember... :( And I would LOVE to see James come down on Harry. It'd be GREAT.
Totally threw me off with the title change but if this means more fic for us in the future....eh, I can handle it. ;)
Hoping for a reply and an update soon!
;) SW

HOLY CHEESE!!!!! That plot twist came out of no where!! I am honestly waiting here with baited breath wanting to see how that works out. I honestly hope its just a dream. Really, Harry went insane? Its almost too tragic. After everything they did to make the world a better place Harry still gets a crappy ending. I hope this has a happy ending. Wonderfully written as always. I always look forward to your updates.

I liked the old title! Anyways, I just can't wait to discover what secret Draco.has! This is a really good story!!! Please update soon

YAY, I was so happy to see this was updated. I wish Hermione didn't feel so...odd around Harry, and I REALLY hope he only wants to talk. Although he can be a bit of a jerk, I actually like Harry.

It's past time for Draco come out with the truth. He should never give anyone the power over him that he's given Pansy.

I wonder how Draco will feel when Hermione learns the truth and vice versa. It should be an interesting conversation.

kewl. I like this story. I like this draco, he has soo much depth to his personality.

Oh how I wish we could see their costumes! And even more so, get caught in the heat that's created when Draco gazes at Hermione!! Loving this! Thank you for posting something new!!
SW

Oh I LOVE this story!!! What an interesting and relativly new concept! Please, Please continue! :)

YAY!!! Thanks for updating. I enjoyed the update and I can't wait to see how things develop. I'm sure there will be plenty of angst a head.