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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boy...How wrong is she. I can't believe this story. What a turn of events. I don't know how I feel about a meek Draco yet. I hope you'll give him a backbone soon. The reason I like Draco is because of his strong personallity. Anyway, updat soon!
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very unexpected story and very strange, one thing is for sure... Draco is not that weak and is more intelligent than what you portrait him in this chapter, but hey it is only the begining, let just wait for the rest.
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! What a great idea for a plot. I can't wait for more!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it is supposed to be Severus and Sirius, but other than that great start. I'm very interested to see where this story is going to go. Great job!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great unique plot. Can't wait to see what's next! Although, I hope Malfoy is not too meek... :) (BTW I LOVE the arrogant Harry, I always thought he was a little bit so but his situation helped to smooth that out)
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far, but why does hermione remember everything and Harry doesn't?
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I like all the questions that this raises. Hermione seems to be doing a splendid job of adapting already. One question, why does Dumbledore seemingly know whats going on?
I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this, and how you twist the situations and characters.
Ohh... please don't make Malfoy too soggy? I like the parrallel between Severus' and his situations, but I do confess to missing his stronger side. I'll be interested to read about how he came to be in that situation, if you put it in. Assuming he is still born with the trademark Malfoy wealth and power, I'm wondering what happened to make him so meek and relient on Hermione's friendship. And if he is so downtrodden and without the influence, how did he come to be head boy? Unless it's marks based, rather than anything else.
Well done so far though. I love stories that make me ponder : )
I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this, and how you twist the situations and characters.
Ohh... please don't make Malfoy too soggy? I like the parrallel between Severus' and his situations, but I do confess to missing his stronger side. I'll be interested to read about how he came to be in that situation, if you put it in. Assuming he is still born with the trademark Malfoy wealth and power, I'm wondering what happened to make him so meek and relient on Hermione's friendship. And if he is so downtrodden and without the influence, how did he come to be head boy? Unless it's marks based, rather than anything else.
Well done so far though. I love stories that make me ponder : )
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a really good start! I can't wait to read more!
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July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love these types of stories! Making a wish/going back in time to change one event and have it have a huge impact onthe future, yet not always in the way it was intended.
Very interesting start. And interesting choice to make with Riddle being found guilty too. I like the twist that the wish was granted before it was even made. Knowing Hermione, she probably would have talked over the pros and cons of the choice before going through with it.
Can't wait to see where this goes. The summary sounds neat and I love that you have N/C and Tort in your warnings with WAFF. Opposite ends of the spectrum there. :)
Very interesting start. And interesting choice to make with Riddle being found guilty too. I like the twist that the wish was granted before it was even made. Knowing Hermione, she probably would have talked over the pros and cons of the choice before going through with it.
Can't wait to see where this goes. The summary sounds neat and I love that you have N/C and Tort in your warnings with WAFF. Opposite ends of the spectrum there. :)