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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An auspicious beginning...
I am indeed sorry to hear about your computer. I also regret that AFF, unlike Fanfiction.Net, does not have an 'alerts' system...
I would like to point out something to you. Perhaps it would behoove you to read through your work before you post it. You may then catch things such as "Ron was conceded" which should be "conceited".
Additionally, I do not much care for this chapter unless you do tie it in as a dream - much like in Butterfly Effect; whenever he changed an event that caused everything else to change, when he found himself in the new 'world' he was assaulted with memories of what his life had been like in that world. Not everything though, and as a result he would suddenly behave in a manner that was strange to him, as it did not fit with his previous life.
I like the idea, and am glad to see that this is a recent post and not something that has been abandoned. I look forward to more.
I am indeed sorry to hear about your computer. I also regret that AFF, unlike Fanfiction.Net, does not have an 'alerts' system...
I would like to point out something to you. Perhaps it would behoove you to read through your work before you post it. You may then catch things such as "Ron was conceded" which should be "conceited".
Additionally, I do not much care for this chapter unless you do tie it in as a dream - much like in Butterfly Effect; whenever he changed an event that caused everything else to change, when he found himself in the new 'world' he was assaulted with memories of what his life had been like in that world. Not everything though, and as a result he would suddenly behave in a manner that was strange to him, as it did not fit with his previous life.
I like the idea, and am glad to see that this is a recent post and not something that has been abandoned. I look forward to more.
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent idea! I love how you've started developing the characters, and I can't wait to find out why Draco is so sad. His father is dead? Can't wait to find out, and I hope your computer troubles end soon. :D
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see how things turn out!
do we get to find out how Draco spent his non-death eater life??
how come snape was his onmy male role model? what happened to lucius??
update soon!!
do we get to find out how Draco spent his non-death eater life??
how come snape was his onmy male role model? what happened to lucius??
update soon!!
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, so happy you updated so soon. Great work, can't wait for more. :)
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awsome comeback. Hope u update more ofthen. With Lots and LOTS of lemons!!!
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the snippets of the old Draco in there.....like when he gets so furiously jealous or upset that she cares. Let's see him hand Ron and Harry their asses already.
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is fun seeing Draco on a different spectrum.. LOL
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally something I haven't seen done before. I notice you said that snape was dracos only male role model, are we going to find out what happened to lucius?
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. Everything is great. Can
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and have a feeling it will be one of my favorites. It