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for Proud of You

by MementoxMori

schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!Snape back..Ya! great story,you have me hooked can't wait for more
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was quite an entrance for both of them, I must say! I'll be waiting to hear how they pulled that one off, or is it 'two' off?
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great!
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh happy day that Snape isn't dead.
I kind of want to run through the computer and hug you for that. :]
I love it. I don't mind at all how short your chapters are.
Like you said you've been told, they seem to have this natural flow to them.
I like the story. I like your way of writing.
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person Tenar10r
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. As someone who also brought Albus and Severus back, I look forward to your inventive explanation as to how they survived or were revived. I :-) I like a story that's made more realistic with a slow build, so I also look forward to more of your story really soon. Thank you! HG4eva
person katiekrm
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your fic. I don't understand why tears would well in Hermione's eyes that Dumbledore was alive unless she was sad he was alive. He was willing to sacrifice her life in a most horrific way. That's pretty scummy. Otherwise, I like it.
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you make me cry.Wonderful.what is the song?
person xDizzyx
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww this was bittersweet.
I mean, i'm glad he isnt dead and all, but still sad that the only way she could thank him was after his death...
kinda sad how life is like that, we're too embrassased to say what people mean to us, but then they die, and suddenly it's clear.