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for Moonlight Sonata

by LydiasTravel

person akaihimena
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LMAO oh Ron. He really is amusing. Update soon please I can't wait for what is in store for Harry. Will we ever see Remus in his human form? I wonder...
person Aalto
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heeeeeheeeeheee!!!!!!! I must have laughed for that last bit Ron threw to Harry for at least ten minutes! My week has been soooo boring so far. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a fast update! I hope your surgery went well. Or is it still a head...?

Anyway, thank you for the fast update, I hope there won't be complications with your recovery and to keep up the good work!
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story already! This is very well written and the plot is interesting. And there is hot Submissive Harry in it..
person Aalto
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love both your stories...! Though I'm still a bit squemish about how quickly Harry got over the pain of the piercings in the Slave to a slave story...

But this story has absolute potential, I love the fact that Harry wasn't disgusted in the morning when he realized the nights happenings weren't a dream. And I think Harry's way overdue for some serious tlc from his mate and the other wolves for what he's endured in his life.

Anyway, apart from a few grammars and such the story is amazing and good and imaginative and many other things. I don't read author notes very often so don't be insulted, but if you have a beta you should hurry him/her a bit. If you don't, please allow me to offer my servises. You can reach me at varjoratsu84@wowmail.com.
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Does this mean Harry is going to become a were? He was bitten by a werewolf... Harry really does play dangerously doesn't he/ I loved this, super yummy, and yes I would love it if you posted more!!!!
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha you write the best stuff! i'm gonna read this story too lol
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to see when Harry informs his friends of this. Yay for the magical creatures though! I've always supported the rights of the sentient magical races from house elves to giants. I don't like McCullen though... He molested Harry! BTW when did Malfoy become a vampire? Or did Dumbledore do with him like he did with Remus and hide it with Malfoy being a vamp for ages.
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is hot as the last, i love the plot and sex!!
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha is great.keep going i am so hooked!!! I love how there is a plot and great sex!
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When will these people learn to wash? *sigh* ;)

And of course, you keep me so entertained with the other one I wasn't going to pass up on another fic, even if the beast did squick me a wee bit! But i'll be fine ;)

I very much like the sound of the plot for this one, very intriguing... lots of claiming, stinking of sex and werewolf, fabulous!

xx