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by LydiasTravel

schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story sounds great. :D
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh okay, suucubi not vampire. That makes sense. Nice chapter, the ending made me laugh out loud. Ron took that better than I thought. Actually AIDS came from monkeys (no, no one had sex with one, they're a food source in Africa somewhere) though I don't know if wolves(or werewolves in this case) could carry. Yeah it's short but at least you update.
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snort* Well, at least Ron's practical! ;)

Sorry you can't keep the painkillers down, can't wait for more x
person kyouteki
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just WOW! There really aren't enough werewolf and harry stories and normally the ones that are out there aren't that great. You managed to have wolf porn and throw in a nice bit of plot! I applaud you!
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I think that the direction this is taking is most original for this ship. I like your writing style and the plot. I hope you are able to recover successfully from your surgery, and that there were no complications. Heal well (and hopefully soon)!
person Bastian
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're back and feeling up to updating. It was a good chapter, and I like the interaction between Harry and Draco. Ron's reaction was a bit off canon, but thats okay. I would really prefer to get more of the main story than to read about Ron freaking out.

I'm looking forward to your next update!
person gweasley
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was real cute... made me laugh. hope you update more soon :)
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, a different take from any of the others that I've seen. I'm sorry about your surgery; I'm assuming they gave you vicodin for the pain, but that stuff doesn't do anything. Try Motrin if you have anything, it worked wonders for me when I had my wisdoms removed. Good luck with your writing.
person Selene89
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo... WOW!!! Please ma'am, can I have some more.
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story but just have to wonder will the wolf know what that other wolf did and who he will blame? Will the wolf stay and it come out, does Remus even know?