rate_review Reviews

Okay. I read your story. I like the idea. But! you really need to work on your transitions. Make them smoother. Don't just hope around it really turns off the excitement. I would also recomend that when remus and harry meet for the first time as lovers that you make it a bit more fluffy. Make it a bit more cutesy. If you catch my drift. But not overly so. Cute with an animal taste to it. Great idea though. Oh also your going to need to develop more of a conlflict. I hope that you have one that you are currently developing. I hope you find good advice in my review. keep up the work.

I have just read this again! I have decided that it is my one of my all time favourties! It makes me really horny! I love it! I want my own alpha wolf, lol. I hope this is updated really really really soon. I cant wait to read more.
Do you email people when you update? If you do I would love to be added to that list.

Nyre

Really god sory keep 'em cumming. jk.

I love this story. Its well written and sexy and I can't wait for more!

Please please please update your stories. I love them but you haven't updated in forever!

this story is hot as hell and i love it please update soon and email me janesmithy@btinternet.com

gah his is getting good! REALLY good, Remus' alpha talk is incredibly sexy! I is mostly ignoring the Mpreg, it's not my thing, but I love the story nonetheless!

Hey, this story is really amazing! Please, please, please send me an email at raineynight713@gmail.com when you update! I hope you update soon! =D

I like this story can I get an alert when the next chapter is ready Thank you

please update i love how harry is remus mate please write more