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for Mother Knows Best

by drowpriestess2003

schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sighs and pouts* You can't just stop there...please? Come on...I'm gonna die here if ya don't give me more soon! *whimpers* Please? Please? Pretty please with a cherry on top?
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, very revealing to the plot. Excellent writing style.
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG,I am loving this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
person kelsin79
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Update soon :)
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I absolutely loved this chapter. As to why I didn't reply to the last one, nothing stood really out. In this chapter I really liked the development and the revelation about the Patriarchs. Usually I don't comment, but I always rate!
person Elphaba
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok I just caught up I am internet less Wahh. GREAT chapters. Youa re doing an excellent job weaving this story!
person Ecks
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I cant wait to read more!
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omgosh you didn't just stop there lol

more please
~eros
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hura rough sex... i wonder if it'll be more.... sensual next time...


~eros