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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #34....
Now, see THIS is what I'm talking about! A chapter you can sink your
teeth into!
The danger! The excitement! The sweet 'Aww..' tender moments!
Did you get some sleep or something??? ;-P
I liked the 'Take Charge' Harry, lets me know he's not viewed as a
'lump-on-the-log' and CAN take charge! Don't ask where I got that
saying from.
I've always felt that any boy who went through what he did as a child
until his teenaged years has got to have balls of steel. Plus, he has the
potential now to be a GREAT leader with Draco by his side, since
I view Draco with the ability to have the 'level-headedness' to come
up with good strategies, with Slytherin deviousness.
..and yes, I see how Draco feels for Harry. :-)
Now, see THIS is what I'm talking about! A chapter you can sink your
teeth into!
The danger! The excitement! The sweet 'Aww..' tender moments!
Did you get some sleep or something??? ;-P
I liked the 'Take Charge' Harry, lets me know he's not viewed as a
'lump-on-the-log' and CAN take charge! Don't ask where I got that
saying from.
I've always felt that any boy who went through what he did as a child
until his teenaged years has got to have balls of steel. Plus, he has the
potential now to be a GREAT leader with Draco by his side, since
I view Draco with the ability to have the 'level-headedness' to come
up with good strategies, with Slytherin deviousness.
..and yes, I see how Draco feels for Harry. :-)
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The interaction with the professors nearly made me wake my husband with my suppressed laughter. You are genius. Manic, incredible, wholely unexpected genius. Thank you.
~Mia
~Mia
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lord of the Rings reference number 2! Thank you for posting once more, as always outstanding job. Continue once more when you have the chance.
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch34: Great chapter! Loved the fight and the Harry/Draco moment at the meeting. Not Aarowshot!
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I simply love this story!
You write it so brilliantly, and you leave the most delighting cliff hangers... And I really like the way you don't have Harry and Draco jumping into bed right away (I know that some of the reason for this is that this story is pre-slash, but still)
You write it so brilliantly, and you leave the most delighting cliff hangers... And I really like the way you don't have Harry and Draco jumping into bed right away (I know that some of the reason for this is that this story is pre-slash, but still)
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice tension. It positively radiates from your words.
~Mia
~Mia
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #33...
1. Ooo...that was unexpected! Do unexpected more!!!
2. You know, I said this a while back and I'll mention it again.
You seem to write through Draco's POV more than Harry's and
even when you DO write through Harry's POV, the focus is
still about Draco.
Like how Harry waxed 'poetically' about Draco's look, as if
he isn't worth such a aristocratic person as Draco.
What about Draco's observations on Harry that isn't a constant
critique on manners or the way he thinks.
How deep does HE feels?
In the meantime, see you in a couple of chapters.
1. Ooo...that was unexpected! Do unexpected more!!!
2. You know, I said this a while back and I'll mention it again.
You seem to write through Draco's POV more than Harry's and
even when you DO write through Harry's POV, the focus is
still about Draco.
Like how Harry waxed 'poetically' about Draco's look, as if
he isn't worth such a aristocratic person as Draco.
What about Draco's observations on Harry that isn't a constant
critique on manners or the way he thinks.
How deep does HE feels?
In the meantime, see you in a couple of chapters.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that was an unexpected ending. I love the character interactions in this chapter. Ginny's actions are really getting on my nerves. I hope Ron figures it out soon and puts a stop to it.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha! take that asshole! so was he under the imperious or just fakin?
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When I read the last line "That was when Ketchum whirled around and kicked Nihil in the stomach," all my mind could conjure was a vision of a small but angry child kicking their guardian in the shin and then giggling manically. It was quite funny although rather odd... Regardless, thank you for posting once more as always this chapter was thoroughly anticipated and enjoyed.