rate_review Reviews

about #37...

1. I said it once I'll say it again, I don't trust Dearborn.
Never have, never will.

2. ...and those moments between Harry & Draco are awesome. :-)

3. Okay, I've already forgot her name, but I'm glad that Auror
instuctor had a bit more tact than the rest and didn't make a
scene when she caught H & D doing the 'tango with tongues'.

4. Question, do you live in the US?

Interesting. If Nhil's forces have withdrawn from the Ministry, then where are they now taking residence is the question in my mind. Thank you for the scene between Harry and Draco as well, relationship development between them is always nice to read. The awkward moment with Sra. Lopez was quite a humorous one, thank you again for that.

about #36...

Hey, I liked that! It was completely away from the norm for a change...and
an appearance by Snape is always good!

..and yes, I meant a chapter with just the one POV, just to get
inside their heads and know what they really think sometimes.

If you go to DeviantArt, just type your name or type Harry Potter first to get
to that particular section first, THEN your name. :-]

Excellent job. On writing Snape's character, and also on the chapter as a whole. The cave scene was the most vividly pictured scene in my mind out of those featured in the pensive memories, it was very well done description wise. Thank you for posting yet another wonderful chapter. Please do so again when possible.

I wouldn't say you've swung too far in Draco's perspective, BUT
it would be nice to see a balance every now and then. Maybe a
POV chapter from both young men every once in awhile?

Before I forget again, did you know folks have done fan art on a
few of your stories? They're on Deviant Art.com...
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about #35...

1. Business for the Fellowship or the Order or whatever it