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by Lomonaaeren

person Mia
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy scary stuff, batman!

~Mia
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sounds way past angry!!! Soooo need chapter 41!!!
person 12blue12
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
meeep >.< cant wait to see how this goes and aw on the harry draco fluff :) ... harry find a friend for draco was kinda funny ... its such a strange concept ... and i bet draco wont appreciate it too much.. i would be kinda offended or maybe he ends up being flattered that harry was thinking about him so much.. who knows... anyway plz update soon1 great chapter!
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch40: I love that Hermione totally got Draco. I love how he thought she looked stupid while she actually came up with a good theory of who Nihil might be.

Oh, are they in trouble? Great chapter!
person SP777
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #40.....

Interesting chapter, with a scenario that had me thinking.

What about an idea of Nihil playing on the insecurities of the
Quartet...or maybe I should say fragile trust? We know how Draco
feels on blood purity, that could be used against him concerning
Hermione. We know how Ron feels left out from Harry's life
concerning Harry is now always with Draco. We KNOW Draco is
feeling unsure of where he stands with Harry concerning commitment
to him and him only.

..AND!!!!

We know Harry is basically in the middle trying to make things work
with all three, with his little subplot on the side trying to find
friends for Draco. Heh...

The punch line is...a scene where Nihil uses those situations against
them, like a 'bee buzzing in their ear'.

Ever thought of that? By the way, how long is this story?
person MewMew2
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job with the visual imagery of the last scene. That's all I got right now, life calls as it were....
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 40!!! Neither of them understand the other!
person Sarah
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Same sarah didnt feel like signing in... awsome chapter... i liked the way you handled harry in this chapter though draco is a little ify hopefuly harry "finds him a friend". cant wait for the next update!
person MewMew2
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating once more. Excellent job with this chapter as usual. I agree with Harry on this one, Draco needs some friends/intellectual allies with which he can converse and make observations with at the least.
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* honestly draco and ron are such dorks