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by Lomonaaeren

schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was incredible! Harry was adorable in confessing this growing (attraction?) pull towards Draco and I was a little proud to see Draco put aside past differences and join Harry instead of all the things he could have done :) And I simply cannot wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
person Lunacom
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It's starting beautifully.
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very strong chapter. Full of emotion and adventure. Who is the perpetrator of the apparition? Interesting the color magic factor.
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude that was awesome!
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Thank you! I love how innocent Harry is in this. He wont know what's happened until he's at Draco's mercy... so to speak. Poor Draco, having to take his time to get Harry. He'll have to try to keep all the lies straight, but he is a Slytherin after all. It would be a real twist if it was an instructor attacking them, just to see how good they are together and not trying to kill them... But that seems unlikely.
person SP777
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #7...

person Anon
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, they're pretty powerful together! I didn't exactly expect that. Poor Harry has to look at Draco... hmm, maybe if they snogged a little in between lessons, he wouldn't have to... but I know it's far to early to even think about it, except for little fluff-obsessed fan girls like me. ^^
person MewMew2
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! I loved the imagery with the two spell types intertwined and flowing around each other; Draco sees fire, and Harry water the complete opposite elements. Thank you for updating this story once more, please do so again when convenient for you.
person SP777
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Child, you've been gone so long, my brain had to play catch up...that
and the fact I'm tired as I write this.
*****

about #7...

Hmm...not much to reveal in this chapter, BUT...I've come to the conclusion
that Ron IS annoying. Is that what you were hoping for? :-)

You know, it would be interesting to see how Draco will be able to help
Harry with his problem, since I feel he is the one who really can.

As for Draco's Patronus, I KNOW he'll be able to do it, but even though it
sounds cliched, I think a dragon WOULD suit him. Hell, every other author
has stuck the poor boy with a ferret patronus.

A little interesting fact, since the constellation Draco is associated with
the dragon in Greek myth, it would be appropriate.

Another [last] thing, I thought for sure, well actually I was hoping that
you would have written Dearborn's reaction when he told the other Auror
teachers about Harry & Draco's compatible magic. I kind of pictured as
excited as a child in Toys R' Us. :-)

Anyway, nuff said...by the way, have you seen the new movie yet? I STILL don't
care for the Harry/Ginny interaction, SO typical. But, DAMN did I love the
duel between the boys, wish it was longer.

Thank God I have you. ^_^
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm now i wonder who sent draco snapes memories. perhaps harry? hmm.. do we get to see draco's patronus yet?