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for Soldier's Welcome

by Lomonaaeren

person nn
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow .......
i love this story, i can't wait to see another chemistry between harry and draco
person SP777
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #9...

Man, there's nothing more dangerous than a bunch of educated ole'
fuddy-duddy's making plans for your life & then expect you to roll
over and take it. Very irritating....regardless of the situation.

Not much to say except, I definitely feel where Draco is coming from.
How frustrating it is to be linked with someone who wishes NOT to
acknowledge it, because they are concerned with Mr. Childishly Selfish!

But, hopefully, Draco can, in a roundabout way, convince Harry that it IS
a good idea to partner with him, especially if he makes it seem like it
was Harry's idea.

But, you'd have to change up what you've got plotted out, right?

...and yes, my email 'bounced to the ounce' [an old R&B reference] right
back to me. IS your email full???
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... Probably too soon to see them training with other pairs and seeing if their can compare with more well training pairs.

With Harry being pulled in so many directions, it's going to be hard for Draco to understand him.... if Draco can ever. But at least Draco can use this to show off how he can stand out. In a good way. Harry has to defend himself from the forces trying to kill them, the instructors, Ron and Draco... How is he ever going to graduate?
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the detailed work of the tale. Excellent exposition of the character point of view.
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah Harry is learning. Hes realized that he may not be able to do this without the help of allies....I just wish he would think of Draco as one of them. And seriously Ron is starting to tick me off. What kind of friend is he always mad at Harry for something that is not even his fault!? <.< What a jerk. Thanks for the update!! Can't wait for more!
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another fab chap! How long is this fic going to be? And will it have a seq? Thnx!
person polka dot
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm shocked Hermione isn't wanting to research the red and black ribbons. Maybe she doesn't have access to a good library. That' must be hard for her.
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
man you know i love harry but is it just me or is he being a little whiny? and ron? really really needs to just get over it and move on
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, fantastic as always!
person polka dot
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohh that's so cute.