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person SP777
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

*singing* Your story is li-ke a drug! And I gotta have iiiiittt!!!*end singing*
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schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that Ron is being written as Ron would act in the books. He's self conscious and selfish but still Harry's friend in the end.

I like that Draco still gets surprised by what Harry can do and know.

So Draco was asking about how Harry pulled engery from him and not what the spell was, right?
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love how you wrote the part where Draco convinces Harry to partner with him, almost as if he were convincing him to date him after having a one night stand and realizing how wonderful it was. They wanted more and with a little help from Draco, Harry realized he did too. But what are Deatheaters doing here?! and I cannot wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sleepy!Draco is cute, Cliffhanger is evil.
I only hope Harry and Draco don't become to smug. Even their magical power is limited, as we've seen. Isn't it quite dangerous to pair them together so that they get used to their compatible magic? If one of them is injured or killed the other will suddenly have to deal with the loss of his power.
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Ah Fuck" lol loved that, urgh please kill Ron hes annoying! Thanx 4 the update!
person Lillybe
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, what is Ginny firecalling Harry about??
Poor Draco being weakened by Harry, hope that doesn't cause problems.
I like the story and cannot wait for an update!
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ack and here i thought that draco might kiss harry *pouts*
person Tree802
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...Im actually relieved! I felt all tense after the last chapter because they weren't getting along. It's interesting to hear Draco be so resonable...i wish you would include more of what he's really thinking, similar to the begining of the story. I found myself a little wary of his intentions...or maybe that's how it is supposed to be? Either way, interesting! Nice cliffhanger.
person polka dot
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If the death eaters are other trainees than they should be was well-equppied or better than Potter since he's a new recruit. It seemed too easy.
person MewMew2
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A spell that makes the 'castee's dreams come true eh? Imaginative and possibly addicting. Top notch job this chapter! Please update once more when you have the time.