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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if maybe Harry's magical core is shedding the gifts he got from Voldermort and he is getting weaker. Maybe he should go to the zoo and talk to a snake so that he can see.
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #12....
I COMPLETELY loved how you pulled off this conversation. I think that was
the MOST adult I've ever seen Draco act, it was definitely what Harry needed.
You're coming along nicely with this. ^_^
After reading this you know what Harry needs? He needs to escape to...SOMEwhere
and release his anger, even if it means going to a VERY deserted place and
SCREAMING out his anger, heck even throwing a few curses would do. Then,
just fall down and release his pain.
That would be a nice idea to do in your story.
Have Harry & Draco go A.W.O.L., as in ''A.W.O.L has been broken'', like a
play on words, but that's up to you to make it work.
Hey, it wouldn't be the first time in military history that trainees decided
to sneak out during basic training.
Just a thought....
Anyway, it would be nice to see Harry come alive during the duels, when
he FINALLY lets go of ALL the s*** he's carrying.
*********
NOW, some of the things that have caught my attention....and it wouldn't
be the first time.
1. Maybe he so tired that admitting Draco was easier than turning him away.
- okay, did you mean ''maybe he WAS so tired....''?
2. Then Potter fetched a long sight from the depths of his belly and said,
I COMPLETELY loved how you pulled off this conversation. I think that was
the MOST adult I've ever seen Draco act, it was definitely what Harry needed.
You're coming along nicely with this. ^_^
After reading this you know what Harry needs? He needs to escape to...SOMEwhere
and release his anger, even if it means going to a VERY deserted place and
SCREAMING out his anger, heck even throwing a few curses would do. Then,
just fall down and release his pain.
That would be a nice idea to do in your story.
Have Harry & Draco go A.W.O.L., as in ''A.W.O.L has been broken'', like a
play on words, but that's up to you to make it work.
Hey, it wouldn't be the first time in military history that trainees decided
to sneak out during basic training.
Just a thought....
Anyway, it would be nice to see Harry come alive during the duels, when
he FINALLY lets go of ALL the s*** he's carrying.
*********
NOW, some of the things that have caught my attention....and it wouldn't
be the first time.
1. Maybe he so tired that admitting Draco was easier than turning him away.
- okay, did you mean ''maybe he WAS so tired....''?
2. Then Potter fetched a long sight from the depths of his belly and said,
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
con't...
Just being concerned...I sorry. [and I meant ''I sorry'']
for some reason, that didn't show.
Just being concerned...I sorry. [and I meant ''I sorry'']
for some reason, that didn't show.
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Glad their finally cumming together
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The fire was back in Harry's eyes. That will be the line of day, the moment of change in the storyline. Thank you for updating once more.
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I was sort of discouraged by the pre-slash warning found in the description, but I am pleasantly surprised. I love this plot line and where you're going with this. I can't wait to read more!
Will you ever change the pre-slash warning? It's not a big deal now that I'm so into the fic, but I'm curious.
Can't wait!!
Will you ever change the pre-slash warning? It's not a big deal now that I'm so into the fic, but I'm curious.
Can't wait!!
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for explaining. You actually got the picture into my head with this chapter (12). Awe, Harry has started to take steps closer to Draco.
I like how Draco sees the fits as a magical effect on Harry. Makes me think that the fits are an attack on Harry. I would think once the compatible magic became more known that the magical attacks were against Draco. Maybe, if the fits are an attack, the attacks on Draco are a way to stop him from possibly helping Harry...
I like how Draco sees the fits as a magical effect on Harry. Makes me think that the fits are an attack on Harry. I would think once the compatible magic became more known that the magical attacks were against Draco. Maybe, if the fits are an attack, the attacks on Draco are a way to stop him from possibly helping Harry...
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is getting so exciting!! So HArry has finally come to terms with it...or at least accepted that Malfoy can help him and wants to. thanks for updating!
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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that was intense
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I suppose I can count on Draco not trying to wait around to get Harry to confide. That was pretty damn horrible, the things Ginny said with no remorse or care. Despite the fact that someone saying the word's "Get help" (or someone helping as much as they could) would normally be someone who cares about that other person a great deal. Even if Harry didn't technically confide in Draco, I do hope that Harry gets some "return on his trust." Great job on this so far.