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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about#19...
I don't know, Dearborn sounds like he's trying to blow smoke
up someone's ass...and Draco is starting to get a wee bit
attached to be offended THAT easily.
PS: a simple yes or no question..Am I correct in assuming you
reside in the vicinity of NY...or around that area? Just curious.
I don't know, Dearborn sounds like he's trying to blow smoke
up someone's ass...and Draco is starting to get a wee bit
attached to be offended THAT easily.
PS: a simple yes or no question..Am I correct in assuming you
reside in the vicinity of NY...or around that area? Just curious.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Some lip action haha! Great job!
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. harry harry harry. man what a dork
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was powerful! How did the red & black magic get into DeChancie? Was he just a shell containing it or did it form when he tried to answer the question? Draco is going to have a hard time explaining this whole situation, I think. and the phrase you used to describe DeChancie's body: "forsaken skin" is awesomely descriptive and would make a cool band name lol.
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo! I absolutely adored that chapter. I love when Harry realized that he trusted Draco and then kissed him passionately.....Ok so that's not how it went but it was awesome nonetheless. Excellent chapter!
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More... That was good... I want more. Now. ^^
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #18....
O_o
1. Whoa! What a nifty [..I bet you hate that word..] way to get your
magic back! But, it was effective. :-)
2.
O_o
1. Whoa! What a nifty [..I bet you hate that word..] way to get your
magic back! But, it was effective. :-)
2.
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Grief Magic... I really like how you described the way it affected Harry, to the point where he became confused at even what a wand was. And I can't say I didn't love how Harry receieved his magic back from Draco. Lovely job with this chapter.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! What a way to leave up hanging!
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why I haven't read anything about lacing Veritaserum in food before, but I liked that. Nihil is sounding more interesting, so far as a bad guy that just wants chaos for the sake of chaos. Also liked the description of what happened there to DeChancie at the end.