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for Soldier's Welcome

by Lomonaaeren

person js
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I wasn't expecting that. Great ending!
person qwerty
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SH*T! I did not see that coming! I'm so glad that you're continuing the second story so soon!
Great job on this 1st story!
person MewMew2
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update and the loophole you threw me for with it. Lucious Malfoy has returned eh? What foreshadowing is this I wonder.......Yes, I think that this cliffhanger along with my own personal theories/suspicions shall tide me over till the next part of this lovely series. Thank you for posting this wonderful story. :)
person Mdunlap
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"(But) he could feel Harry
person SP777
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #44...

Yeah, I realized I jumped the gun for the moment. :-)

Anyway, it's about TIME I get a duel from you, I was
going to ask in the last chapter, but decided to wait
and see.

You really put some thoughts in how you were going to
go about pulling them off. These truly outdone the past
duels you've written and I'm glad to see how Draco & Harry
balance each other when it comes to fighting. Draco seems
more flamboyant & graceful, while Harry is more intense,
focused & straight-forward.

Now, I KNOW at this point one of the Aurors can't be trusted,
it could be Lopez or someone else, but even though it seemed
like they kicked the bucket, I'll stick with Dearborn, unless
you convince me otherwise.

Besides there IS three of them.

By the way, WILL we be getting a Peacock Patronus out of Draco soon? :-)
person SP777
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I forgot...until next time! :-)
person Lillybe
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a truly amazing story.
If the next chapter is the last are you going to continue on with the second one in the series straight away or are you taking a break beforehand (please say it is the former) ^^
person MewMew2
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update! Chapter 45 is the last one eh? I eagerly await its arrival!!!!! One hell of a cliffhanger indeed!
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I soooo need chapter 45!!!
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoa awesome! the last part made me go eww but still good