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by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
why that brainless idiot! what the hell is he thinking? honestly he's being a complete and utter dunderhead
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely a far cry from Hogwarts as far as these professors in their relations with their students go. Looking forward to why Gregory acted the way she did. Great chapter.
person rafiq
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have been wondering when you would bring Hagrid back into the story but I cetainly didn't expect such a brilliant cliff-hanging turn of events.
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my, what a mess!
I had completely forgotten about good old Hagrid. Leave it up to him to bring Harry in life-threatening danger.
And I suspect Dearborn. Yes I do.
person tamikolee
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chap, what a cliff hanger. Thanks
person SP777
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #21...

1. I was beginning to wonder if you would mention Nemo again.
What took ya' so long? ..and it's good to see Hagrid again, didn't
realize I missed him, until the name was mentioned.

2. the Fortress Shield...nice touch. :-)

3. ...and a curse upon thee for ending the chapter there!!!
person qwerty
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffie! But thanks for the explanation.
God, Gregory is un-freaking-believable. I have no idea what to think about her anymore. Was she caught playing both sides and Nihil's forces caught up with her?
Great chapter! Keep writing!
person chelbear
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
god. why do you do this to me???
such a cliff hanger. hot damn.
this story really makes me happy, btw.

also, ive been religiously following your writing for awhile now (im not a creeper. im just usually too lazy to write a review lol. i recently made one of my friends, cronikartist, a fan of yours too :D )
writing my first legit drarry fic as of now, and will post within another week or so. i hope it manages to catch your interest, cause i'd be super psyched to hear a review or something from you =^.^=
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco really. There was no way he could continue that discussion. Harry is too one tracked and unshakeable sometimes. lol. Nice chapter. I kind of like the intense reaction Harry gave Ron when Ron continued to prod.
person qwerty
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Oh, the many possibilities for what could be in that letter! I'm so eager to know! It's interesting that Harry would tell Draco about his issues h=with Ginny but not with what's in the letter, hmm...
Go Harry for standing his ground against Ron. I love an assertive!Harry.
Keep going!