schedule
October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man, a cliffhanger! and an awesome one at that. this chapter was quite funny, especially "narcissa's" entrance. can't wait for the next update :)
schedule
October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What in the world just happened? Soooo need chapter 25!!!
schedule
October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
harry is exasperating that is true. i wonder what happened to him? i love how Narcissa is firm but kind with him. i actually really like the way that you writ her always. a lot of people see her as a villain but i think she's more the way you portray her, a loving mother and wife who did what she had to do to keep her family alive and safe from old moldy shorts. i think that's how J.K. portrayed her too.
schedule
October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for posting and fulfilling my request. Enjoyable as always, the chapter leaves me drawing my own questions...
schedule
October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #23...
1. Pushkin probably would have insisted on counting the number of threads
in Voldemort
1. Pushkin probably would have insisted on counting the number of threads
in Voldemort
schedule
October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch23: Oh, it would stand to reason that they wouldn't be the only ones that are investigating the attacks. But what if some are working against Draco and Harry.
schedule
October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww i just had this mental image of harry sound asleep in class. soo cute. lol. its good that draco is there to help harry when he is overwhelmed
schedule
October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well, I'm simply too curious to hear about Snape's pensieve. Will it be part of this story or is meant to be part of the next one?
Nice chapter. But why does Harry think Draco wouldn't want to date him? *Takes Harry by his shoulders and shakes some sense into him*
Nice chapter. But why does Harry think Draco wouldn't want to date him? *Takes Harry by his shoulders and shakes some sense into him*
schedule
October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So this fic is really good and I love it and all that good stuff, but what I really wanted to review about was the formating and how it was spaced out instead of blocked together, which I think makes it easier to read and I appreciate that because when the text is blocked, I skip around and don't read all of the text but with it separated, I am forced to read it all and honestly every word of this fic deserves my full attention.
schedule
October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review for Chapter 22. I like the small moment where Draco compared Harry's motivation, his pride, to Draco's own actions during the war. Good chapter. I'm glad Draco was able to get an answer out of Harry, one that wasn't an angry outburst as Ron continues to cause.