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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job as usual, the only thing typo, 5th line from the bottom: "and that was like he silver dog, too." - it should be ' and that was like THE silver dog, too'-. Great job! Please update again when you can.
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter cant wait for the next update!
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg please, PLEASE let them kiss under those stars!!!
i'm begging you!
i'm begging you!
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how Harry comes around to manning up.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah. I'm disappointed that Draco got interrupted too, but it was easy to see coming since Harry was already headed that way. I'm not sure if I can guess at this so soon, but it was interesting to find that Nihil might be a female, capable of wandless magic at that. Nice job with this chapter.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore your writing so much :) I look forward to every time this story updates. It feels like it could be canon, it's that good.
I noticed mid-way through chapter 26 that you had a typo--"Draco was comfortable having here there." In reference to Narcissa, ought to be "having her there".
I'm so impressed with your creativity, I love the star decoration. It's glamorous without being tacky. Very beautiful :)
I noticed mid-way through chapter 26 that you had a typo--"Draco was comfortable having here there." In reference to Narcissa, ought to be "having her there".
I'm so impressed with your creativity, I love the star decoration. It's glamorous without being tacky. Very beautiful :)
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a tangled web they are in!! Every time I think it can't get any more complicated, it does.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 27!!!
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well i have to say that the whole idea of the party's theme was beautiful! and that you really have got me wondering about what will happen next
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. I cannot wait to learn more about Jarvis and that dark-haired lady.
Great job. Keep going!
Great job. Keep going!