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by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch27:Yay! Harry's growing some hair on his chest this chapter. *smiles*
person miodrago
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that'd alright, it's just that your story is soooo...you know.
I was so caught up in it (:
Keep it up!!
person SP777
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #28...

Hmm...hmph...hunh! That was rather interesting.

I may have to reread it a couple times to get a complete
visual in my head. But, basically, what WAS it they were
doing?

If they weren't trying to drain each other's magic, then
were they trying to use/absorb the magic in the spells INSTEAD,
once they are released???
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw sweet chap! Fab job!
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. I completely adored this chapter. Harry is an absolute darling, and I have to say I derived a certain pleasure from having Harry ignore Ginny's obvious advances (obvious to him at least). I really can't wait to see Draco's side next chapter, if you'll cover it. I want to know what might be going through his head as Harry made his wish. Lovely job with this chapter.
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! ^_^ bring on the sexual tension ^_^
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was wonderful. Amazing. I truly melted inside!
person SP777
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #27....

Well....that was a nice little look in 'the Slice of Life of Harry Potter.'

But, when I think about it, I get the feeling you were making a comparison
between life with Harry's friends & his life with Draco.

As if to say, Harry DOES desire what his friends have with each other and
he desires it with Draco. But, it IS kinda obvious when you think about
it.

Was that what you were trying to get across?
person qwerty
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love the gifts that Harry and Draco gave to one another.
"The words seemed to open a trap beneath him, so that he fell down and down and landed at the bottom of a pit with reality written on the walls" - awesome imagery! Nice that Harry finally realizes who he wants. Now the interesting part is what he's going to do about it!
Great chapter! Keep going!
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:) the dog is vey cute and the notebook thingy sounds like something i wish i had in school. lol. could that woman have been Andromeda?