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Oh no!!! I hope they stop being stubborn long enough to work together.

Best cliffes at the worst times lol! Great job!

Well played. I liked how Nusquam's identity (of sorts) is revealed in this chapter, yet her motives kept secret. The interactions between Harry and Draco are real I found myself thinking the other day as real people and wondering about solutions concerning their current relationship to each other. I must admit, it was more than a little scary. Thank you for posting once more, please do so again at your earliest convenience.

I just read this as far as the 29th chapter. It's scary beautiful. The beginning parts bout the Aurory and training reminded me of Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card. I love the intricacy, the latticework of their growing friendship and fumbling misunderstandings. I think that is one of the main things that always shine about your work.

~Mia

about #29...

1. Ooo...Ms. 'Shock-Em-Til-Their-Eyes-Bleed' strikes again! There you go AGAIN
with that imagery. *tsk* Mmmhmm...gotta look out for you fo' sho'!

2. ...and is it just me or does Draco act like he's grooming Harry
the way you would groom your future wife??? Sit up straight, chew slowly,
walk in a calm manner, don't laugh too loud, hide your emotions, be
presentable, act like you know more than everyone else, etc. ...

Draco needs to be introduced to that saying, 'Give a little, get a little'
or something of that nature.

3. Hey, was I correct in saying that there is possibly a Trinity, instead
of JUST the one person doing these killings?

Ch28.... Harry slimed Draco... and in the non-sexual way. lol. I'm so glad Harry knows he likes Draco. If only Draco could man up.

No problem, thank you for posting. As always, I have thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, please update once more when convenient.

They aren't even a couple and Draco's already trying to change him. Poor Harry!

yeah i didn't really think it was but then you said that it was someone draco should know and she popped right into my head. it's awesome that harry and draco are improving so much yet not too much too fast

Excellent, as usual. Glad that they are making progress...(sigh), with their magic, anyway.