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by Lomonaaeren

person Mia
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous. I could eat your words. Thank you.

~Mia
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
They kissed *happy dance happy dance* Now I demand more. Much more. I am completely addicted to this fic.
Oh and the wail of disappointment that there wasn't another chapter just made my husband laugh at me.
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29: Poor Harry, taking out everything on Draco, but still wanting him. And about the ending of the chapter... *blink* *blink*

Chapter 30: I love how instinctive it has become for them to protect one another. Even with the wall between them.

Yay! Harry manned up! Thank you!
person MewMew2
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are most welcome. Thank you for posting once again, Draco and Harry Kissing without a constructive purpose, oh the frivolity! Please update once more when possible.
person SP777
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM

about #30....

1. It just occurred to me, ARE you going to clue us in to WHY
the attacks seem to be towards Harry & Draco?

...or are they just magnets for trouble?

2. Say are we talking big, BIG humongous needle here...or
your typical medium sized 'there's-no-way-you're-sticking-me
in-the-butt-with-that!' needle :-)

3. Oh, nice fighting action there, it's going to get to the point
you'll have your OWN little Wizard War Battle Scene one
day to make folks drool with envy! :-)

But, you have a long way to go.

and

4. It's about TIME!
person Minue
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems they can not avoid each other any more! Go, Harry!

Where is Politesse right now? When I first read about that dog, I thought it was some kind of trap. Because it's a cross-breed, isn't it? How do they know somebody did not want Harry to have it? It's something Nemo would do, I think.

Are there really three, or is that just what Nusquam wants them to think?

By the way, I admire your updating schedule. It's very nice to see a new chapter of my favourite stories every few days.
person ariathel
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
!! I love how quickly you update! Such a horrible cliff hanger haha.
person qwerty
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Harry in this chapter!
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i see what you mean about the woman. honestly harry and draco just love to hurt each other don't they? i really like how this is progressing. gettin a lil gross there though.
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think it's only natural that they have some issues, both of them stubborn, both dealing with insecurities and Draco still spoiled in many ways. You describe it very well! But they've come a long way already.
Following this story is fun!
For the last few chapters, I enjoyed once more the little details, such as the falling stars and the magic Nusquam did just now. Politesse is very cute and a brilliant idea, though I had to smile at her name, because in German "Politesse" means a woman who goes around and deals out parking fine notices, usually in an uniform and with a mean smile.