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by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is so brilliantly written.
the progress in the story is amazing.

Then Harry tells Draco he loves him an BAM it stops, the story.... whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
schedule November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!! On to part 2!!
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to let you know that all of your stories on AFF.net are messing up. The format is all off and it's impossible to read. More than just this story are affected, but I don't seem to have the same problem on other author's stories. I don't know if it's some setting, but I wanted to give you a heads up. Keep up the awesome work, I love all your stories. Now that I actually have an account, I'll probably review all of them!
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutley fabulous!!!! The only issue I have is that you just left it there in a cliff-hanger!! It eats me alive inside until I can continue reading and find out what happens next. Thankfully the next story is already complete or I don't know what I would do with myself.
As for the story itself I had to take a couple of minutes for a laughing break when I read the name Samwise Ketchum and then later on when he suggested they be called the Fellowship. The first thoughts that came to my head was Lord of the Ring and Pokemon at the same time. Very entertaining lol. I love all of the random names that you come up with. The plot is great and the twists you use with magic are incredible and so creative. The compatible magic reminds me a little of the bond between Harry, Draco, and Severus in Their Pheonix, but it works so well.
I don't think there are any repeats in your stories and if there are I don't know what them. This story has pulled me in just like all of the other ones I've read. They leave me happy and wanting more. This one more so because of how you left it. But oh well... On to the next story.
Great job!!!! =)
person NessaC
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. My breath has literally been taken away with this story. I've loved every minute of it, especially because you've managed to focus on the plot & story rather than just the sexual side.. and yet the sexual tension is amazing.
Thank you for an amazing story. I'm going to go get started on the second part now :)

~Spiritxx
person Luthien Galathiel
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've read through most of your works, but this story has topped my list as my fave. I can't wait for the next installment, and was wondering if there was a way to be notified when the story updates. If you could shoot me an e mail I would appreciate it! Thanx! ^^
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
someone really needs to smack harry for even considering necromancy! probably draco or hermione. and wow lucius was a twist
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need the sequel!!!
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful story. You got me, though, as I'd put off reading it until it was over, to discover that it was part of a trilogy. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What?!? Oh boy, daddy's home.

I'm so sad to see Draco's mentor gone and now Lopez is becoming a mystery too... But life goes one for our embattled Hero. I can't wait for the next part in the trilogy. Great job.