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for la persistencia de la memoria

by ScorpioPhoenix

person polka dot
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmm I wonder how the alarm works if it is only the house in danger or the baby, will Narcissa come to the rescue again?
person MOWA!
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was powerful. I wanna see how this goes! I want the next chapter so much! Is there anyway I can bribe you!?!?!!
person r
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm so loving this story... drama.. love... the best one i have read in a long time.. keep up the great work and this chapter was very good. can't wait to read the next one
person violetfly
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you're updating again! Love this story but argh, what a cliffhanger! Can't wait to read more:)
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahh poor draco! It must be so hard having post natal depression and harry having no memory wat so ever! Update again soon!
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I was sort of reluctant to read this story at first. I thought I would just be in for some angst as well as good old HarryDraco lovin'. But I was sorely proven wrong! There's just a rush of feeling and dramatics that I can't resist. Now that Draco has possible killed himself...I really can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for writin'!
person SilverLion
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Here we go again. I wonder what it's going to take to get their heads out of their asses? Cassi's near-death? I hope it doesn't have to come to that. Perhaps Draco's current accident will have a drastic effect on their situation.
person omnni
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor draco. Hope to find out if they get out before the fire gets rest of the house.
person SP777
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

Okay, have you ever heard of the saying about, ''..it's
like watching a bad accident, you can't turn away from it..''?

That's Harry & Draco's life right now.

The bodies are thrown all over place, the souls have left and
you're hoping they see the light at the end of the tunnel.

...and that's the feeling I got from this chapter. O_o

Bottom line, you're doing a GREAT job!
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 6!!!