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for la persistencia de la memoria

by ScorpioPhoenix

schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They are all stupid! Sooo need chapter 10!!!
person Kelli
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
person Risa
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! You have me on SUCH tenderhooks. Between the way Harry's all confused, and Malfoy's forcing himself to live/move on...... It's an incredible story!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Lexi
schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am upset with Draco for using Charlie. Charlie is such a nice man and for Draco to be using him to get back at Harry is just... I mean, if he really does feel something for Charlie then fine. He isn't with Harry anymore so he has a right to be with anyone he chooses. He does still love Harry, yes, but either he needs to accept that there will be nothing between them and move on with good intentions! Or, he needs to stop this thing with Charlie because that isn't fair to him.

And Harry! I feel bad for him. No one truely gets what he himself had to deal with. Everyone sort of took Draco side from the beginning. It is no wonder he did everything in his power to distance himself from the blond. But Harry did everything wrong by breaking up Ginny and Dean for his own selfish means. Now look what is happening, he is remembering! Argh, the entire situation just sucks for everyone involved.

And for some reason, despite my undying love for everything Harry/Draco, I wouldn't be too bothered if Draco ends up with Charlie =/

The madness must stop!
person serilla
schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Really don't know how this story is going to pan out (which is totally great). First there is Draco who still loves Harry but is determine to move on. Second there is Harry who is starting to remember his life with Draco but who has promise Ginny no matter what that he wants to be with her and will never hurt her again and then there is Charlie broken up with his long time boyfriend - somehow I think it's going to be very hard for anyone to get what they want. Will Harry despite everything stay with Ginny even when he realises he does not love her? Does Charlie still love his boyfriend or is he ready to move on? Can Draco still really want to be with Harry after everything that has happen and does he have any true feelings for Charlie? For me I rather see Draco and Charlie together and Harry with Ginny (totally mean I know but Harry never gave Draco a chance, just jump straight back to Ginny not even caring about Draco or Dean and if Harry does get back with Draco, Dean should not get back with Ginny after she dump him so quick) What is Flint going to do? And is Pansy going to interfere more?. Can't wait to find out all the answers to my questions. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person SP777
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #9...

Man! I felt like I was on a rollercoaster...Ron was irritated with
Draco, Hermione was shocked by Draco's prescence, Bill & George were
unsure of what to do, Charlie was trying to keep nuetral, Ginny was
feeling like the 'odd-man-out', and Harry was like 'what-tha'-hell!'

This was good. ^__^

Oh, you had me laughing on that flamers comment.
person crimvoc
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not much into MPreg really but reading la persistencia de la memoria made me feel okay to read such genre of slash between Harry and Draco. I mean, to tell you the truth i can't really handle MPreg but with the turn of events, it's great! The writing style, the unpredictable actions such as Harry not really wanting to try catch up into reality, and the story isn't "hurried up". It's taking its time to progress till the climax then ending! It's a great story, you have a deviant mind up there. Haha.

Hope you update fast though, the story has become one of my favorites already! :)
person Juana13
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. : ( Bad, bad Draco!! He's gonna hurt Charlie, or vice versa. Nothing good will come out of this, and they both know it.
And Harry! Sheesh, I feel sorry for the poor guy at the same time I'm wanting him to just be with Draco already and get over Ginny. : (
Ugh, both of them are just hurting themselves and it's sad to watch.....
I really hope those two are alright in the end..........
Thank for finally updating! Really hope that the next chapter is up soon!!! Can't wait!!!!!!
person polka dot
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Charlie's getting a little action and now Draco can add one legged man to his list of conquests...hehehe
person blur
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is Draco really going to have sex with Charlie? What happen to Charlie's boyfriend? What makes them break off? Poor Charlie......