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June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goddd.ddddd.d.d.d.
PLEASE update this soon, it's ridiculously naughty and fucking hot as hell. Reviewing is really awkward cuz it's weird putting into words how hot that was, but I assure you I bet me and many others enjoyed it.
I don't normally review stories, but this totally needs one, as you soooooooo need to update this!
Don't go easy on the kinks and smut ;) it's just what we like.
PLEASE update this soon, it's ridiculously naughty and fucking hot as hell. Reviewing is really awkward cuz it's weird putting into words how hot that was, but I assure you I bet me and many others enjoyed it.
I don't normally review stories, but this totally needs one, as you soooooooo need to update this!
Don't go easy on the kinks and smut ;) it's just what we like.
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June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. Don't know why, but I really love to see poor Harry being humiliated by Lucius. I really hope that you'll continue on this story soon.
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning.
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy reading this story and i can't wait to find out what happens next. You asked people to help you with grammar and incorrect spelling so i figured i would help you out.
1)"It's all right, you did wonderfully." the Death Eater stroked Harry's head like a perent would. perent---parent.
2)Trying not to make any moves so not to desturb... desturb---disturb.
3)Without the fire..., but he remaind still. remaind---remained.
4)Just as he tought about getting up.... tought---thought.
5)I like it when... these noughty things... noughty---naughty.
6)Cold fingers started to play with his pearcing... pearcing---piercing.
7)"You make such delocious noises." delocious---delicious.
8)blund object lave... lave---leave
Keep up the great work though.
1)"It's all right, you did wonderfully." the Death Eater stroked Harry's head like a perent would. perent---parent.
2)Trying not to make any moves so not to desturb... desturb---disturb.
3)Without the fire..., but he remaind still. remaind---remained.
4)Just as he tought about getting up.... tought---thought.
5)I like it when... these noughty things... noughty---naughty.
6)Cold fingers started to play with his pearcing... pearcing---piercing.
7)"You make such delocious noises." delocious---delicious.
8)blund object lave... lave---leave
Keep up the great work though.
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May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story is pretty good so far. I do request that you use the spell check function before you post and read over it once to be sure that the words aren't connected together and misplaced. The spelling errors are very distracting and get progressively worse as the story continues. Otherwise good job.
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh. So deliciously wrong! Can't wait for more
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, looved :D
Achja, Gratulation zur bestandenen Pruefung!!!
Achja, Gratulation zur bestandenen Pruefung!!!
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, i really like this story _^
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! LOooved! I hope you write more!!!