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Ooh! The sexual tention could be cut with a knife. Bloody brilliant chapter. How old are they in this story. Hope you'll update soon enough.
Ps. I am VERY thrilled that you're going to continue with the veela fic.

I love this story. The sexual tension you could cut with a knife. Draco being mad, bad and dangerous to know. Hermione being smart, tart and hard to get to know. I love it, update soon. Please

I hate that you only update once a week. Your story is just that good. Plain and simple. You seemed to have nailed the inner workings of Malfoy to the proverbial wall. It seems like you know him personally. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!

that was AMAZING again. every detail, every shiver, every shudder, every movement, every taste was felt by your readers. her embarrassment, her hurt, her desire, her need, her pain, her tears just cut through you. and I loved how she explained to him that she didn't know the rules - that vulnerability that she has about men and love (she's not a casual shagger or lover, she gives her heart) is such a perfect contrast to the fighter that she is also. gosh it just twisted your gut.

and Draco, I guess, with Padma is fulfilling physical needs but only learning to cope with his emotional ones. LOVE Greg and Blaise but especially Greg, who sees Draco slowly drowning in his own feelings and not understanding how to talk to Hermione. instead he does what he men do best, muck it up and get it out physically.

lovely Kerri....

PLEASE update faster. I am logging in 2-4 times a day just to read your updates. There is no doubt that this fic deserves more fedback. I'll review!!! Twice for every chapter to show my support. Just please update!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope you update soon. I'm really getting into this story.

I have to say I really love this story. It's so believable and realistic, especially the way you have written Draco and Hermione. Amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Love it! Can't wait for you to continue!!

That was wonderful....beautiful....raw and oh so real. I love this fic Kerri. Draco's anger and determination have yielded a mature and formidable man. And a man he is....he's no boy. I love how you've woven in Greg and Blaise to the cause and how you've brought the five men closer. Its interesting how Hermione dances on the fringes holding on to her prejudices.

That confrontation between Draco and Hermione left not only her shaken but, I suspect, Draco. I'm assuming this story will only be seven chapters? Can't remember your first AN...will have to back and read. My, when they finally come together, they'll be explosive.

Another realistic chapter. My throat felt dry while reading this. I could really see this sll happening. And boy am I lad that you're not uniting DM/HG but building their relationship of trust and friendship. I do hope that you'll update soon. And PLEASE make some room for your veela fic.