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for All You Need is Family

by bored137654

person melvin
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this chapter
1 could be awesome
2 yes
3 as fast as possible!
update soon!
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I so think Snape should be Harry's first! And the whole creature idea seems neat. As I'm from Sweden as well I really think 15 is the way to go, kinda.. Plus it'd be freaking hot!! And why am I writing in english if you're from Sweden I'll never know.. ^^; yah.. Okej, slutar nu.. Men helt
person Snakelette
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love the idea of Harry being raised by Sirius and Remus and getting together with Snape. Please update again soon!

1. Creatures/mates could be interesting, but if they choose to be together without that (choice versus "destiny") that would be great too. Hmmm, mates does sound very nice... :3
2. Yes please! I'm reading this for the snarry, so snarry all the way! *grin*
3. 15 is okay, though a bit young. 16 would be legal in the UK. Depends on how you'll write/plot the story really; do you want them to first get together in Harry's 5th or 6th year at Hogwarts? Are there events in either year that would get them closer?
person catnona
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I think Sev and Harry should be soul mates...hence the recognition...but not necessarily an easy relationship at the beginning. It would be really sweet if Sev was Harry's first...but doesn't have to be necessary and lastly I believe that the UK's legal age for consensual sex is 16...but it's your story so whatever
person YaoiBatman
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I'm so glad you updated! XD Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person darrena
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story!!! I soooo can't wait for more :) I love Sirius... he's sooooo funny.
person stray523
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I was right?! Sweet! I loved this last chapter, seeing Sirius all fatherly and worried and stuff. Can't wait until the next one's up!
person kunitsu
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this already seems lovely. I love the way Harry and Severus met for the first time. Cant wait for more
person Meyka
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON COZ THIS ROCKED MY WORLD!
person Jenka
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Have you used my aftershave?" SO CUTE!!! That scene pushed its way into my heart! Severus is sweetly in denial as well. I can't wait to see what will happen! I'm addicted to this story. Update!