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for Chocolate Bats of Love

by helenesnape

person Anon
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cute... I love stuff like this. Hermione's a bit bitchy... she needs some chocolate!
person Robin
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BATS?!?
Oh, dear, I am glad Hermione found something so Un-Valentine and yet so fitting.
And his response was astonishing really.
Nice ending, great story.
Please more - and maybe just a wee bit longer? Just for your readers? ;-)
person Angie30
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and sweet, I giggled at the last line in the chapter. You have made my day my dear, I've had a terrible one and you just made it awhole lot brighter. Thank you. :)