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for Shadow Play

by YokoBlack

schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10!!!! I soooooo need more!!!
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
meow baby! yeah!
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Drama!!! Stalker ex-boyfriend from the Broadway days!!!! Eek!~! Trouble.


Also, you seriously need to lay off the spell checker and go to the forums to hook up with a Beta. That or re-read your stories out loud before publishing them. Spell check is all well and good, but it doesn't always correct properly and if there is a missing word or a word spelled wrong, but spelled correctly for some other word, it won't pick it up. There were a lot of errors in this chapter to the point that I had to re-read sentences to figure out what word was missing or replaced by something else. (example: "him" instead of "house")

Other than that, excellent chapter. I always enjoy updates for this story. Keep up the good work.
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooooo need chapter 9!!!!
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I enjoy the change in the relationship between Draco and James 'Harry'. I love how he loves teasing him that's how I always see them. Anyways best wishes.
person Toddy
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There is a town called 'Hell' in Norway too. It has a railway station so you can catch a train tho Hell if you wish to.

Enjoying the story, looking forward to the next installment.
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8!!!
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol

I did not know that about Michigan and Arizona, although I can imagine. ^^

Keep up the good work.
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far, especially the way that Harry torments Draco. It makes me laugh ^_^ Did you know that chapter 6 and 7 are the same?
person Cloud646
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
think there was an error or something, chapter 6 and 7 are the same.