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April 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I can’t believe you abandon this it was on a good track a nice been to the marriage law not the same as the other ones and much more interesting than some keep going come back please
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May 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Argh!! I am really quite forlorn to discover that this fascinating story ends here... You wrote it beautifully, weaving together all the necessary bits in just the right way. I really enjoyed the 5 chapters and would cheerfully read more if you ever decided to continue this potentially delightful adventure.
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May 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Argh!! I am really quite forlorn to discover that this fascinating story ends here... You wrote it beautifully, weaving together all the necessary bits in just the right way. I really enjoyed the 5 chapters and would cheerfully read more if you ever decided to continue this potentially delightful adventure.
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May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story has gotten off to a great start. I hope you post more soon, I am really looking forward to the next chapters.
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! I would love to see how you go with this....
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story, Well done for not making it to easy.
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well isn't he being on ass? great chappy.Even Mr.Malfoys pushing it.lol can't wait for more.
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My favorite line by far was, "And despite her usual level head in bad situations, Hermione promptly gave in to the temptation to pass out cold."
It reminded me of Douglas Adams and his writing style. I always love one there's a couple of lines in a work that really stick out like that.
I hope you'll continue on with this for quite some time.
All the best,
Elisheva
It reminded me of Douglas Adams and his writing style. I always love one there's a couple of lines in a work that really stick out like that.
I hope you'll continue on with this for quite some time.
All the best,
Elisheva
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a neat story. The characters personalities are still very intact. I like how you have them both rebelling against what seems to be destiny. They can't seem to tell they are matches in both personality and behavior. Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Lady Serin
Lady Serin
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the whole concept of this story. I just wish you would post more often. great story by the way.