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by tsorg

schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This one is certainly very good... Especially the fight for dominance... well done! More please...
person Coipje
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know
every day I stop by to look if you have updated yet
I love this story so much :)
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that she is fighting things a bit! I would like for them to work it out, don't get me wrong, but I love that she's not being a dishrag about it and making him work for her attention. That she would like more than just a shag. Thank you for not making it too simplified.
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LORD that man is persistent...I think I was melting everytime he said "little girl." Wait, I need to wipe the drool.

I love his take no prisoners course of action. Hermione has NO idea what she's in for.

PS: I am a tart....and proud of it. 'Scuse me, I've got to find the nearest library's secluded corner.
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did I mention that I've had that marvelous visual of Lucius in the library in my head for two days and can't get rid of it? Not that I'm complaining, mind you. Just had to let you know that your descriptions are nearly damn perfect!
person kitty08
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story and I love it!! I wonder what Lucius next step will be to secure Hermione to him... please update soon!!!
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if anyone heard them in the library. I mean I'm betting Hermione was kind of loud. I mean, hell, I would be if I was in that situation. Could you imagine being in the library then hearing that? Would you listen or run away? If it was Lucius, I would listen, watch, and try to join in LOL! I don't understand why she was trying to run from that. That was hot! A little voyeurism to end the day, you know what I'm saying? lol. Great update. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next update!
person Coipje
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
of course it did
And this one to :)
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh how very yummy this is. I can't wait to see where this goes. I also can't wait to see how hard Hermione fights Lucius.
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There is no better frase to it OH Glorious Smut!!!! Thank you for writing it ! I love Draco and Hermione as my first choise but this two certainly are getting a pretty good spot.. LOL