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Love this story. He is so loving leading her around, letting her think she is controlling things. It's a very Slytherin way to deal with the rule loving Hermione. They are so explosive together and Lucius is so very delicious! Looking forward to more!

I just got done reading all 5 chapter I and want to tell you that this story is hot! and i am looking forward to reading more. I like the way Lucius and Hermione react to each other. update when you can.

I don't think Hermione quite understands the situation she is in right now..well all the more fun for us to follow it until it clicks!! lol I can't wait to see what Lucius will come up with..something genius no doubt. Poor poor Hermione...*sniggers and smirks*

TS, when you create a line across your story, the story then will not wrap around any smaller than that line. You have a row of asterisks at the top that is quite long.

Chapter 4: It

Chapter 5:

So I totally love/hate how stubborn Hermione is in this story. Sometimes I'm like, "That's right! Don't give in!" Then other times I'm like "What the fuck are you doing?! Enjoy it!" I love Lucius' statement in this chapter about how she is the only one to capture his attention. Way to make a girl feel special! I know it would make me feel special. I might have thrown Filch's pastry out the door and told him to fetch it just so I can lock him out the room! Great update and I love the title of the chapter. I agree, sometimes when you say Stop, no and don't you really mean No, Don't Stop! LOL

Chapter 4

This is a delightful chapter T! I was just giggling when Hermione started to pack her things, thinking she can run and hide. I find her mixed feeling about being dominated wonderfully amusing and titillating. She knows she

Chapter 5

Yep, Hermione is stubborn. There is no doubt about that. I love it though. I think Lucius should have to woo her a bit before she completely summits to him. Yes, we all know this is what Hermione wants, but I don

AS much as I loved the byplay, if she doesn't want to be steamrollered, she does need to dig in her heels a bit. Lucius is often too used to getting his own way; a bit of creative opposition would be good for him. Loved the new chapter.

Chapter Five: *takes a small bow* I did win! Though, the victory is bittersweet, considering I've already lost 10 points. I maintain that I was well within the parameters set forth at the beginning of the match; a kick is not a punch. Unfortunately, Guy wouldn't be swayed. *grumbles* Be sure to vote!

Now onto the review... Lucius is a pushy thing! I know that's what the prompt was, though, and consider it quite an accomplishment that you've convinced me to lust after the man even though he's so bossy. I love that you threw Aurora in there. I picture her just like you do: voluptuous and sexy and lusting after Slytherin-types. A bit of a cliffie there at the end, Madam T. How very wicked of you! This was a lovely, sexy chapter, and I'm eager for more.

Bea

Postscript: That post-fight story about LaBib was superb! I really enjoyed it...