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LOL beautiful chapter!!! i wish Lucius had legimacy so he could read her mind and get it over with lol. Great job in keeping their personalities cannon! Can't wait for the next chapter! I do seem to smell remorse from Hermione again.

It's such a relief to read a D/s story done right. Excellent writing and I can't wait for more.

Ahh my darling, you never fail to make me smile in some kind of way. Let me just say that this chapter was off the chain. I absolutely love a possessive Lucius, and this was him at his finest. The whole possessive thing is a great turn on, but that's neither here or there. Great update. I want to see what happens in the morning when Hermione realizes that she officially gave herself over to Lucius. Will she continue to fight it, or will she just go with the new flow? I totally vote for going with the new flow and making the best of it. I'm pretty sure Hermione is capable of keeping Lucius on his toes! Great update!

what a lovely little blend of yielding dominance and pretend submission....sexy.

lord, he couldn't take it at the end could he? I love that he went looking for her.

Chapter 6: Ah, poor Hermione who thinks she can control her environment

oooh girl I looked each day
and now finally an update
I love you

Oh My Oh my!!!!!!!! Hot steamy and powerful... Love it!

I love how in the beginning, Hermione thinks she will gain control if she hides her sexuality in conservative clothes, but by the end, she realizes she should embrace it.

You describe Lucius perfectly. His subservience is like that of a lion. He is giving in, but you definitely get the feeling he might pounce on her at any time. His safe word even demonstrates that perfectly. LOL

This was a lovely chapter. I can feel the power play between them so vividly. This story is turning out to be SO HAWT! Excellent job!

You are so wrong for ending it right there! That was mean! Great update! I'm glad to see that Hermione is done running away from the situation, and instead holding her own. Who knew that she could put the big bad Lucius in his place if she really put her mind to it? Raise your hand if you did! Mine's up! Great update so far and please next time don't take us to the brink and then leave us dry. That's not nice and also how u get blue balls lmao

Lucius may be a switch, but he still is in control, and she knows it. Nice to see your update! this will probably make my week!