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What an awful time to cut this off, you terrible terrible person!! Don't get me wrong, I LOVE this chapter, but what the hell??? Okay maybe I'm a hypocrite (read the first chapter of my story 'the lesson' - I have a very similar cliffie - but still!! So not okay!!! Grr. You must update very very soon or I will be very put out. Hmm. :0) Someonenotme

Rule Number 1 Hermione...Never ever get caught!! Well damn, she was and it looks like Lucius is all for giving out some punishment. I bet you it will be delectable. Makes me wish I was on the receiving end. Great update even though I was a little shocked to see Severus and Aurora together. Nice couple especially since we know so little about her. Maybe u could feel in the gaps! Great update, as usual, and I can't wait to see if Lucius catches Hermione or not.

I'm laughing so hard, I can barely write. This was just the pick me up I needed so thank you.

My fave line: "A serious heart to heart discussion was in order with one devious little miss a discussion where she wouldn

Chapter 9: Jealousy

She has my sympathies--I've done some incredibly stupid things out of jealousy! ;)

Another great chapter! My congrats for this. I am pleased to see you portraying Hermione as an independent woman who is just as insecure as any other woman. I look forward to seeing their affections blossom and Them exploring just how far she can be pushed.

I also can't wait for the rest of the world to find out about them. I seem to be picturing a vein exploding in Ron's forehead and Harry breaking someone's nose lmao.

keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chappy


Lady Serin

Short is okay; any longer and I would have drowned my keyboard!

I have been greatly anticipating this chapter and you certainly delivered. Their relationship is progressing along very nicely and we got to see Lucius's tender side. That was so sweet! I love Lucius's pursuit of Hermione and that he reads her quite well. I love that he's going to work on her self image. And I love the balance of their relationship. Now I can't wait for the next chapter, either!

Well, that's quite a way to wake up in the morning. Sign me up for the next round lol. Great update, as always. I wonder how much control Hermione is willing to give up to Lucius. I hope she doesn't completely give it up because then she wouldn't be Hermione anymore. She has to trust Lucius first, which is something I think they are still working on. The control will come later, or at least in my opinion it will. It's going to be interesting watching them tame each other because they both have very strong personalities. I can't wait to see what you have cooking girlie!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?