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*shoves and pushes her way to the front of the line, looks up at Lucius and smiles sweetly* "Spank me, please!"

LOL - that was so fantastic. He had amazing control over the situation.

I love your uptight version of Hermione and your portrayal of Professor Malfoy *grin*... I hope Lucius doesn't take too long to loosen her up! ;o)
wow...Professor Malfoy... *fans self* Can you throw in a small cameo of Professor Snape somewhere to complete the fantasy?
THANKS for writing; I'll be looking for updates!

Yes! Another story. I'm excited to read this one. It looks promising and interesting. Please update soon. I wonder how Hermione is going to get back at Lucius for his high and mighty rules. I would have been pissed as well. Livid. Wonderful start. A very promising one! Why does he think she is soo ungly? that is disappointing. Cries. Lol. But he is still his handsome self. lOL. I love it. Is this fic going to contain a jealous Lucius or Hermione? I would like to see either both jealous or at least feel a bit jealous somewhere in the story as it develops. Please update soon!

C.C.

Chapter One: I'm quite excited to start one of your stories (I'm much more inclined to review stories when I start them from the beginning), and this looks very promising. I simply adore the way you write Lucius; he's very no-nonsense and demanding, which is my favourite characterisation. I think that he was entirely justified in confronting Hermione, whose anal retention and fussiness is so coarse. For being such an uptight little thing, she certainly can be impertinent! Mr. Malfoy must teach her some manners. I eagerly await an update!

Regards,
Bea

Naughty Lucius and naughty Hermione....oh who will discipline who? I love how she finds him hot yet distasteful.

He's so baaaad and loves it.

OMG I like it already
Hermione is really uptight and it is time for Lucius or
professor Malfoy to loosen her up ;)

Brilliant first chapter! Please update soon!! :P