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Chapter 2:
Oh. My. God. Uh, that was so freaking hot, I almost don't even know what to write. When Lucius slapped Hermione I gasped out loud and then with the spanking and the caressing and....well, just the general hotness, really. Yeah, this chapter was a doozy. Also, I love the word "smite." One doesn't read that often enough!

I don't like that he hit her.

Oh My Lord, what a second chapter! If this is only the second chapter, I can't wait to see what you have planned next...great update!

Yay T!

I love how Hermione is reverting to a naughty schoolgirl, sneaking into Lucius

Oh! Lucius is soooo deliciously evil and I love it!

wow. I hadn't expect that. It was kinda abrut. I did think thought that he was pretty hard slapping her and well, spanking her with a belt.It was too fast for my liking. But you are the author.Lol. And she said sorry. Squawk. I was expecting a lot from Hermione. And well, from Lucius. Yeah he is an arse, a fine one at that, but he is still a gentleman. Or so he proclaims. He could have had asked for something else, or could have brought her down with his sly ways. I just hope she gets back at him good this time! Lol. what happened to her wand? did she get it back?

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT!

Squee! I am so happy to see you've posted this! I loved this story! *happy dance*
Your Lucius is so domineering and hawt!

Sorry, I had to redo this. They grammatical mistake I made in the original was driving me batty. I stew over crap like that. LOL

Chapter Two: Well, Hermione certainly is a naughty thing. What a mouth! And sneaking into Lucius's classroom like that. She certainly did deserve the belt. I love how firm Lucius is and how pliable Hermione can be. They complement each other quite nicely. Can't wait to see what comes next!

Bea

This is so, so, so good! It's going into my "favorites" folder :)