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for Help me Ron

by ronsmistress

person SL
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love the build-up of the story. One thing I'd like to see is more gradual transition of their friends. In the narrative as-is I feel the(Harry,Draco,etc.) came around dropping their aniomosity to each other a bit too abruptly.
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just finished my second reading of this one and it's still my favorite of yours!!!! I love the slow pacing and the fully developed characters. You could totally see Ron & Pansy falling for each other. I also love what you did with Hermione & Draco and I also loved the sequel to this, "Help Me Draco." Keep up the good work!
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great ending! With the theme being so dark I wasn't sure if Ron/Pansy were going to get a happy ending.
Yeah its a shame your R/P fics don't get that many reviews. That is just because the pair isn't that popular.
But I love your fics and can't wait for the next one.
I think it would be awesome if you wrote a Ron/Pansy story where they are in the middle of a divorce but work things out =]
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I love your Pansy/Ron stories! I confess that I am a hardcore R/Hr shipper, but you write Pansy & Ron in an amazingly believable way, and you manage to do it without committing complete character assassination on Hermione (which so many writers do when writing non-canon couples; it's so lazy)! I love them all, every single one. I might like this one the best ("Help me, Ron") although I also loved Beauty & the Beast AND would *love* to see more of your werewolf!Pansy/Ron stories. Fantastic. Please keep writing, there needs to be more Pansy/Ron in the fandom and yours are amazing.
person Vengeance
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hiii!
I made this account just to review your story, and tell you how great I think you are!
The stories you write are great, I love reading Pansy&Ron, it's different and fresh. And the way you make Ron a gentleman is just so perfect!
I beg you to keep writing, cause I love your stories!
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love ron/pansy stories. always look forward to your stories ;)
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love unusual pairings. : )

Pansy is an excellent character to work with. There isn't too much background for her, so it's easier to twist things to be the way you want them.

I loved this story. It was simple and sweet. Considering much of the Ronbashing that goes on, it's refreshing to find a story in which his character is allowed to develop in a positive way.

I'm looking forward to "Help me Draco", to be sure. It's yummy just to think about.
person DarQuing
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahaha! (Help me Draco) That'll be interesting. :D

Please update soon! :)
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, I'm glad to see Hermione fuming at Ron's comments. The eyebrow line was brilliant. Can't wait to see what Hermione will be plotting next.
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. I wonder what really is going in Hermione's head, and I hope its the regret of losing Ron.