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wow (fans self) that was hot

i would let him buy me a drink, take me on a ride, and give me some "experience" any time. Please make a follow-up for the rest of us who like a bad boy with ink, that smells like a "real" man, knows how to get dirty at work and at play, and who can ride anything....

thanks for sharing your story

snort, my word verification is depraved, how true...

jillian

Brilliant. And steaming hot. I could use some life experience with Draco any day xD
Great job! Any chance you're considering writing a sequel to this? *drools*

That was an awsome story. You did a wonderful job.

I love the back-and-forth patter between them and the sex is hot. This is one of the few D/Hr fics that have sounded realistic to me. Please write more!

Loved it! Simply fantastic! Do you really have to make it a one-shot? I don't think I'm the only one is saying I would like to see more of their relationship :)

Effing hooooot!

Thanks everyone for the most reviews I've gotten in such a short amount of time EVER! Yes there are still some typo's I need to fix and when I catch all of them I'll post an edited version.
I was asked why there was a muggle pub so close to the ministry. My answer was that in Prisoner of Azkaban Mr.Weasley and Harry entered the ministry through a phone booth in the middle of a public MUGGLE street. Therefore I figured that the ministry must be hidden in plain sight in the middle of a bustling city. This is why they have Killians and Guinness instead of Firewhisky and Butterbeer.
I may indeed add another chapter to this, or maybe just another continued one-shot. If I get carried away with plot I tend to peeter out towards the end and I cant stand abandoned fanfics. Im sure most of you would agree.
So keep the reviews coming and I'll see what I can do about continuing it.
Thanks people!

Your first fanfic it may be....but it better not be your last. :) Very deliciously enjoyable, the playful banter, the hopeful, suggestive remarks that had a surprisingly postive answer, that oh so sexy motorbike ride and bang - from the door to the table it was lightning speed erotic heat and deliciously deep sex. Surprised they managed to walk to the bedroom to have round two. LOL And the ending - love it when the writer leaves you wanting more. I'm of the opinion you should write a companion piece to this (as well as other stories) :) I look forward to more of your work. :)

I totally think you should go on to chapter 2!! lol an maybe 3 an 4 an 5 lol you get the picture. :]

loved it! Hope you can make it into a longer fic. So much potential.

execellent