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for Breakin\' Up A Heart Of Stone

by vbruce

schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!!
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well written chapter, darkephoenix! I liked the play of emotions in everyone's heart, whether it was a 'I understand' or a sigh of relief. But I thought you said you were taking a break from sadness? Look forward to the wedding being a happy one!
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The hardest thing about doing angst and emotion is the honesty it requires. You do it well.
person Tazzy
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*coos* SO lovely!

And finally, Lucius seems to get through to Hermione! Let's hope it's a good start to her healing.....
person TammaraG
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your fics - I emjoy the ooc Lucius and Hermione my only complaint is that it's been so long since you have update the older ones and they aren't finished
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating this! I had missed it! Very funny, though short, chapter. Yes, let's hide all the wands! I'm liking this story with nothing grievously evil in it. It's a nice break from 'Moon'.
person Tazzy
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* nah the levity is perfect there.

Besides, she needed to be shaken up to break through the grief she was wallowing in. As someone put it once, she was treasuring the grief as if it was the only thing left of Ron. (okay it was another story that was talking more about Sanzo and his Master but the sentiment is the same)

*claps* And Bravo to Lucius!
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!!!That was fun! She will be mad...but he is so right in doing this...still...hahahaha Draco made laugh...hahahaha
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm, that's interesting.

But I don't quite get why it was two stories.

I like it though :)
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell I thought this story was finished..I am so glad you are adding to it.Hell of a chappy can't wait for more!!