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for The Escort

by HermioneMalfoFan

schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a lil sad but i really like how its goin.
your doin great. I hope Draco doesn't get cold feet.
person KhloeBee
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is really awsome. That was a great first chapter keep up the good work and update soon.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far. I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow i really can't wait to see what happenes. And how his going to take to finding out that its really Hermione.
You did a great job.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting beginning! Can't wait till she tells him it's his kid :)
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found it so amusing that she was irked by her clients following the supposed cardinal rule of never acknowledging they were in the company of an escort in public and yet she can't bring herself to tell Molly and Arthur what she's really doing for a living while she's studying and trying to be a good mum. I do admire the way you've portrayed her though - how hard it is to study, work and bring up a child on your own and thank goodness she does have the Weasleys there to help out. The questions - where are her parents and why don't they help out? And who is the baby's father and why doesn't he want said child? Very intriguing, I very much enjoyed this first chapter. Next please. :)
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!! Keep going!!! Please please please!!!
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh.... This was fantastic! Very hot. I can't wait for more.whonis sophie's father?
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was another face for Hermione, but you got talent, that last scene was hot!!!! Very promising... More please...