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Very curious and intriguing. I look forward to seeing where you take this story!

Good story, please update soon.

i like the first 2 chapter but when harry raped and hurt tonks i was sad becuase she ever did anything she would have been faithful to harry with out him being so mean i do hope that harry will get with mia luna and maybe make it up to tonks i could see him treating ginny like that but not tonks anyway good story

What is going on with Harry?

Very good chapter mate, PLEASE update soon, so we can see what happens next.

I've just found your story and wished to tell you how much I'm enjoying it. Evil!Dumbledore is always a perk, and the letters have been very amusing. What I think I've liked most is the way you've portrayed the goblins (especially in chapter 1) - intellegent beings with a social structure outside of humanity, but who have honor and strong will.

I'd also like to applaud your spelling, punctuation and grammar. While not perfect (who is?), there are far fewer errors than in most of the stories I've seen in the past few years. Thank you for being attentive - or at least using the spell/grammar checking function on your writing program.

chapter 1: good start I'm glad that gay fucker got what was coming to him

hmm interesting...harry has gone quite dark... i wonder what will happen next.

i hope snape plan goes as he would like .... please please update soon i would love to read more

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