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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It didn't really feel like Snape to me. He's far too ambitious to fantasise such mundane images. And he's not nearly that forgiving.
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that was not writing, that was poetry. Image after image, rhythm building straight to his climax, the climax. And so so true to character. Well done, lady.
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was excellent! Very powerful and evocative. I loved it!
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story. I think it's how their life together would have ended, not a great romance for the ages, but just normal everyday stuff, eating away at them.